Wednesday, 9 August 2017

Stories about a playground.......

I can see children laughing in the playground. I can see pretty butterflies in the sky. I feel happy. I feel awesome on the swing.
Amber

I can see the slide. People are running in the park.
Farhan

I can see beautiful flowers with Mum and Dad at the park.
Nicol

I went to the museum in the school holidays with my sister and my Dad. The sky tower is gigantic.
Prisha

I can see a tower I can see a slide.
Jasmine

I can see a playground. Children are laughing. They are shouting and they are happy. The slide feels smooth and hot in the sun.
Jada

I can see a big, tall slide.
Sakheesh

I can see a swing. I can see a slide. The boy and girl are laughing
Jana

I can see the playground. A boy is climbing on the ladder. He is laughing.
Veronika

I can see a slide. The girl and boy are shouting.
Rohan

I can see a beehive. It was fun in the forest.
Kian

I can smell delicious and yummy bread and buns. I can see hot pies cooking in the kitchen. I can hear the mixer cooking cake.
Eesha

I can see the wind blowing the trees and I can see the bushes.
Khalid

I like the bakery.
Jasper




I can see yummy, delicious bread and scrumptious muffins. I can smell cake. It smells like chocolate. The bakers are setting up the bakery for the customers to arrive. The bakery has mixers.
Anshika

I can see a playground. The boy is walking to a hole on the playground.
Pei Ru

I can see a tall tree.
Shay

I can see some trees and sunlight. I can see leaves falling off trees. I can hear a kiwi and that kiwi saw me and mada a sound.

Yuqing

4 comments:

  1. Very good descriptive writing Room 19! You guys painted a very clear picture in my mind as you guys used some very descriptive language. Keep it up!

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  2. Great job ! I love the way you used adjectives to describe what you see.
    Well Done !

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  3. Excellent descriptive writing room 19. I liked the way you guys used effective vocabulary.

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  4. Ka Pai Room 19!!! I liked the way you all added interesting vocabulary.

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